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. 1. LOOK AT THIS OUTLINE, IS IT CLEAR ENOUGH 7 
Introduction 
who, children 
w/len, su1111iu:r holidays 
Con.iict 
Hide-n-seekgame 
A child goes missiJ13 
Complicatio11 
The incide11t gocs public 
Pollee search 
Resolution 
Child rc-appears 
2. NOW IMPROVE ON THE SECOND-STAGE SENTENCES, 
The mysteriously disappearance 
It was warm afternoon of the Brown's family holidays 
This two little brothers · were playing in the park 
His parerits enjoyed the garden party with sorne friends 
John and Robert m~fagroup of chiJdren ánd they decided 
After a couple of hours, they found a big place 
It was a large, lovely and peaceful place with differents plants an.d trees. . 
The groundwas covered } grass. 
The children were astonish at what they were seeing, 
they á.greed to stay and spent time in that place. 
Robert, who was the oldest of the Bt'()wn's brothers, 
wanted to play hide- n-seek with the others boys. , 
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. Toe children played 
Robert found all the children except for John . . 
who was the last child to be found 
They searched for the trees and among the bushes. 
lk,W, John was still disappeared. 
In desesperation, Robert decided to tell his parents about the happening. 
He run to the house as fast as he could. 
.Knowing this, Robert's parents called to the police inunediately. 
they started to look for one week / but nobody find him. • 
This terrible case was reported 
After exactly twelve days, 
john appeared mysteriously in front of his house in a very cold ·morning 
(very unusual .in summer). 
His body was covered of mud and his face was pale. 
Nobody could explain ;~¡;.;,,. 
except for he had remembered, 
during the game, he entered in a dark cave with mud 
but he fell in the ground and fainted. 
After that, he appeared in front of his house 
3. FINISH THE COMPOSmON, ADDING ANY PERSONAL TOUCHES YOU WlSH. 
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Here ar~ sorne descripllons of lyplcal paopla for each of lhe ... 
slgns. Use \ha chart (and your knowledge) to match lha 
dascriplions to \he signs. · · 
. 1 T11ey are happie$l \1hen they're ai hocn~. ,Thay are . 
¡¡ qWt1estlca1ed, chee·nul,, aqd aflectio:náta'. Thay are also · 
. sympalheiic and sensitiva.' A klnd, loyal íriend. 
2 · They have hol lempers and blllng tongues. They like 
givitig ordors. Furtharmore, lhay ara very strong-wllled. 
They are good in emerg·encles. They make very bad 
. enemles, 
· . ·. 3 They are charmlng, inlelligent and írlandly, allhough 1 
· wouldn'l lrusl lhern ver; rnuch. Thay ara creativa and . 
,easy-going. They get fed up very quJckly and also íind 11. 
hard lo concentrate far long. 
4 [lotd and darlng. lhey are ~ery,ambllious. HQwever, 
. lhey are nol only careless ol athers' leelings, bul they 
ára also poor lisleners. · · 
5 They are alhlelic and lave outdoor lile. In addltlon, they 
are very good w·llh lheir hands.- They don't mind hard · · 
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but lind il dilticull to relax. They doa't obey qrders 
.very well. • . · 
6 They are- calm and hale qtfarrellihQ, peJhaps they are 
unarnbillous. They made excellanl paren\~ a~d 
.nelghbours. On lhe negativa sida, ·th~y can be cool and 
meanwilh money. · · · · 
.1 ·Thoy, go lrom one extreme to lha other. LIie Is a series 
ol ups and dOW~~· .. ,T9ey_ Cflra .a lol lar \he problems ol 
\he world and n'ü~jor 1ssues. They always stand out_ from 
lila <;rowd. Nol always very pracllcal, lhoúgh. 
· · 8 They are ll_ard to undersland. Thay are ver¡ e~slly 
1n11uencea by olhers, and· can be passlve. They havs 
strong farnily U.es, bµt can be a lltlle sad and unhappy. 
9 They .are iaiiM'e~s; 1alinough nevar foollshly so. They are 
trustworthy, and :Jilonesl. They make lrlends and 
anemias easily, allhough-they. _rpay not pay e'rióugh 
allenlion lo olhers. · · 
· 1 o They are very J~sl ·and ballev~ In falr~ess. They always . 
wanl 9006 relatlons wilh everyone. They have excellent 
. laste, f.lnd-can also b~ arlisllc, They c~n be dreamers, 
arid money slips lhr~gh thelr flngers. 
1· They are de0p lhinkers, afien lhey ar~ toó serious. 
· They ma~e good studenls. Thelr lemper can· be 
.sudqen, and lhey like telling people whal to do~ They 
. .can also ~-ª lnloleranl, ·~md sorneUmes moo<5"y.· 
12 Allhough :~!IY ,and cheerful, lhey caA ba lmpolila as 
well. They prten· mal<e thelr way lo lhe lop. They lhin~ a 
lol ol lhem,selves, and lhough generous hosls, they, are 
n~l one hundred per cenl trustworlhy. •